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Post   Posted: Aug 12, 2007 - 03:50 PM Reply with quote Back to top
Anyone care to critique my new splash page?

http://myinternetearnings.com/mpsplash.html

Thanks,

Roger

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Post   Posted: Aug 13, 2007 - 03:32 PM Reply with quote Back to top
Looks pretty good. I would say a little too much red though.

And it looks like you missed a word... "and other programs that make pay in order" --- I belive you need forgot "you" in between make and pay.

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